Feedback for Product Landing Page - Jun 14

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Hi Campers!

I would love some feedback on my product landing page: https://codepen.io/miscliq/full/YzZOYoy

There’s aloooooooooooooooooot I need to work on but baby steps I guess?
Thanks in advance! =)

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It is very responsive, and it looks good

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Nice work @miscliq . But I noticed an horizontal scroll bar on my mobile device meaning the page isn’t fully responsive. Perhaps you could adjust your widths to correct that.
Also, the height you assigned to your header is too small, hence cutting off your nav links which seem only visible on sections with dark background as shown in the attached screenshot.

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Your page looks good @miscliq. Some things to revisit;

  • Make your page responsive. Remember, the R in RWD stands for Responsive
    • There’s a horizontal scrollbar on smaller screens
  • Check that the user has entered a valid email addr. Throw an HTML5 validation error if not.
    • You learned to do this when coding the survey form
  • Do not use view port units for font sizes. The user should always be in control of the text size on the page (that is, they should be able to manually increase the text size). Using view port units prevents them from doing this. Your job as a developer is to make sure your page is responsive to text size increases. If you don’t know how to manually increase the text size, using Firefox, go to the ‘View->Zoom’ menu and activate ‘Zoom Text Only’. Then while holding down the Ctrl key scroll your middle mouse button to increase the text size. If font-sizes are defined with vw units the only way a user can increase the text size is to widen the browser window. What if the user has really bad eyesight and can’t make the browser window wide enough?
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Hi @Roma!

Thank you so much for the feedback! I will be remaking the page soon. I’m not really happy with how the page turned out haha. I’ll keep you updated on the new page soon!

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Hi @Jedidiah!

Thank you for the feedback! I will be remaking the page soon. Keeping your feedback in mind.

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