I like the overall look, it’s clean and simple. Good job so far!
But there are a few issues:
- Your “About me” text is not visible. I noticed that there is something hiding behind the nav-bar so I copied all the text on the page and pasted it into a .txt file and saw your text. Talking about this text:
My name is Sabrina Garcia, I live in Uruguay with my husband, my daughter and my two children. In order to obtain income without the need to stop caring for and provide care and support to my children I have a small business, at the moment I make for sale face masks, hair tails, hair clips among other things, soon I will also have T-shirts and blouses for sale too.
It’s hiding under here:
So when I click the “About Me” button, and it takes me a little bit down the page, but I can’t see anything.
The video player size is too big. It doesn’t fit on my screen and I use a 4K display. Make it smaller and scalable depending on the screen resolution.
The “My Work” section is unclear. You just put the video there, but what does it mean. Did you make the video? Did you make the product that is featured in the video, or were you part of the team? You need a little bit of text to explain this.
Bigger headings. Make the headings bigger so the different sections of the site are easily recognizable.
The contact form is hard to use and read. There needs to be more spacing between the elements, they’re too close together right now and it’s confusing because it looks like one jumbled mess of boxes and text.
You need to explain your services, what you offer, and what you can do. It’s not clear. Whoever is visiting your site needs to know this, so they can decide if they want to contact you and what they can expect from you.
Hope this helps. It’s a good start, bravo for the effort. And good luck!