Feedback on Tribute Page: Robin Williams

Code Feedback
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Hi to all FCC coders.

I spent a bit of time on this project:
https://codepen.io/narghar/full/jozRZK

any feedback is highly appreciated.

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It looks really good @narghar. A couple of things to revisit;

  • you have a misspelling in your CSS for your header class, jusify-content: center;
  • think about possibly speeding up the load of all those images. Scrolling on a small screen it looks like there’s nothing unless the user pauses for a long enough time for something to come up
  • because of the delay in loading, when clicking on timeline link it’s usually off by a couple
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@narghar Very nice!
Here are my suggestions:

  • Add text-align: justify to the paragraph to make the words space out better.
  • Why does the last movie tile “The Butler” slide in from the right and all the others slide up? Shouldn’t they all be the same?
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First of all thank you guys for your feedback :slight_smile:

Here is my second version after all your suggestions:
https://codepen.io/narghar/full/RmBRwx

I don’t know if a faster load of images will work correctly on all mobile devices. I just set other animation settings for devices with a screen width below 640px

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Wow, that’s very impressive.

I like the design, and the animation is great. But, in case you want to work more on the animation:

  • The cards in the filmography disappear when they’re halfway off the screen, which is a bit weird.
  • When scrolling back up the filmography, it would make more sense if the films were already there, instead of sliding back in.
  • The anchor links are a couple of years off for me - 1989 takes me to The Fisher King, 1982 takes me to Moscow on the Hudson
  • Maybe you don’t need links for every year? A link for 1980s, 1990s, 2000s and 2010s would probably be enough.

I really do think it’s a really cool site, though.

(for reference, I’m viewing on Firefox, on a Windows laptop).

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Hi, thank you for your feedback.
Indeed, disappearing cards looked strange.
Links fixed and reduced and animation also changed a bit.
I think now how to get from bottom or middle to top, too much scrolling for me today :smile:
Third version: https://codepen.io/narghar/full/arjXxO

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