Feedback wanted on tribute page please

Feedback wanted on tribute page please
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#1

I’ve created a simple tribute page, I’d appreciate any feedback. I took some text from biography.com and used loret ipsum for the rest, apart from the very bottom bit.

https://codepen.io/fivebiscuits/full/KMNoqL/


#2

Looks good, but you left some Lorem Ipsum text in there!