Finished my Landing-Page

Project Feedback
#1

Hei there,

i would appreciate some feedback to my landing-page:

https://codepen.io/Akloib/pen/OJVrvRx

I struggle to come up with content to fill in. I don’t think this is much of a problem for the landing-page, but for the tech-doc-page. How do you approach this?

Best wishes,
A

#2

Hello, congratulations for finished Landing Page Project.

Your project looks good. A couple things I would suggest:

  1. Viewport not a little bit below the section when I click each nav link
  2. Add responsive for video as well
  3. When I use zoom text only, some of section should display properly
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#3

Your page looks good @Akloib. Some things to revisit;

  • Run your HTML code through the W3C validator.
    • There is an HTML5 coding error you should be aware of and address.
    • Since copy/paste from codepen you can ignore the first warning and first two errors.
  • Make your page responsive. Remember, the R in RWD stands for Responsive
    • There’s a horizontal scrollbar on smaller screens. The video falls out of the container.
  • You are using this scale: 1.05; incorrectly. See
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#4

Hei @Roma, Hei @IndraSubagja,

thank you a lot for your feedback. I did implement your constructive thoughts.

Although, @IndraSubagja i am not sure what you meant with the zoom text only point. Not seeing enough of the whole picture, yet, to undestand ist correctly :slight_smile:

Hope you having a nice day!

bw,
A

#5

Good job cleaning things up @Akloib. Two minor things to revisit;

  • Change the cursor to a pointer when hovering over the submit button. (you’ve done it with the continue buttons)
  • Check that the user has entered a valid email addr. Throw an HTML5 validation error if not.
    • You learned to do this when coding the survey form
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#6

Thx @Roma,

i changed the courser property to pointer. I was confused. Because i didn’t do it for the continue buttons ^^
They had the property because those are a-tags and the submit button is an input-tag. Regardless, i changed it :slight_smile:

About the HTML5 validation error, do you mean that it should throw an error if i try to enter something else than a email?
Because that is working for me.

bw,
A

#7

Or if it’s blank and the submit is clicked. There should be an HTML5 validation error thrown. You learned to do this when you did the survey form.

#8

ahhhh, got you. did change it!

thx again :slight_smile:

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#9

Good job! (+20 characters)