Hello all! This is my tribute page. I would appreciate your feedback and things where I could improve.
The layout is good, but I do not get what he has done until the last line “cricket” make me think of sport. Your content may be more clear.
Your page looks good @adhetya.mit2023. Some things to revisit;
- Accessibility is about being accessible to all users. Review the giving meaningful text to links lesson. For a more thorough explanation read Web Accessibility in Mind.
- “wikipedia page” is not accessible
- Make your page responsive. Remember, the R in RWD stands for Responsive
- There’s a horizontal scrollbar on large and small screens
Hi @Sibert. Thanks for your feedback. Any idea how to make the content more clear? Maybe change the description at the beginning to cricketer or something? Any suggestions are welcome
Hi @Roma. Thanks for your feedback. The page is responsive for me. I checked it in my phone. Maybe you can send a screenshot or something so that I know what the issue is exactly? As for the accessibility part, I’ll definitely look into it.
Think as you are presenting a complete stranger to your buddy. In a few sentences. Like a preamble. “This is the most famous cricketer…, which is known for… etc”. Think “newspaper”: Headline, preamble and article.
This topic was automatically closed 182 days after the last reply. New replies are no longer allowed.