Gibson product landing page - feedback wanted

Hey everyone! I have just completed my Product landing page and would like some feedback. Link . As always, all criticism is welcome. Thank you for taking the time to go through my code.

Hey Marios,

great job so far! :clap:


My ideas:

  • all tests pass, awesome!

  • you can increase the overall readability of your page by adding some more spacing, e.g. between the different sections; you can read more about it here

  • another practice to increase overall readability is to give the different sections a slightly different background color

  • the 3 pricing boxes look “not so nice”; I think you are able to make a simple one like this:

Screenshot_2020-08-18_08-41-22

  • I think the email box doesn’t fit into the whole “aura” of the page, style-wise

Keep us posted and keep up the good work!

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Hi @miku86 ! Thanks for the feedback. I took your advise and tweaked both the white-space between my headers and the way my sales boxes look. It’s not perfect but I think they look nicer now, though further feedback is more than welcome.

I think the email box doesn’t fit into the whole “aura” of the page, style-wise

I hear you. I would not have put it there if it wasn’t a requirement that I have one of those to pass the tests. I really don’t know what to do with it. Any ideas?

Great work!

I mean that it doesn’t match the rest of the styling.

Your site’s current stylings:

  • white background
  • black text
  • red accents
  • yellow call-to-action buttons
  • serif font family
  • large font size

The newsletter’s stylings:

  • sans-serif input placeholder
  • sans-serif button
  • light blue call-to-action button
  • small font size

“What is the element that breaks the site’s consistency?”
=> the newsletter section

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Oooooh! Now I get what you mean. Great point about the consistency of the site. I went ahead and had another go at styling the form. How does it look now? Thanks for all the time you are putting into critiquing my design by the way. I really appreciate all the feedback.

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