Just Completed my Tribute Page. I need RUTHLESS feedback, please :)

Here is my tribute page Tribute Page

It’s very nice! The timeline is very thorough and the top image is great and I like the timeline navigation.


  1. The quote at the top has such dark text on a black background that it’s nearly impossible to read.
  2. Most of the timeline sentences are sentence fragments that cut off mid word.
  3. Needs some work for responsiveness (smaller screens).

Congrats on completing your first FCC project! Good luck with the others!

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Thank you @StuffieStephie. Most of the sentences are fragments because I copied the content from another website and wrote Python code to clean it up. And the code wasn’t “intelligent” enough. :slight_smile: