Let's discuss your "Pomodoro Clock"

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Thanks! It’s always great to hear feedback on a project :slight_smile:

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Hilarious. Loved being aggressively shamed and funny sound effects :open_mouth:

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https://codepen.io/alexisko/full/KQoddJ/

Unfortunately didn’t get to create the break feature yet, but here’s my pomodoro clock! Please let me know what you think of it :smiley:

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I really like the design, it is clean and minimal, but bold. Get that break part done! :smiley:

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Please critique my pomodoro timer!
https://blbaylis.github.io/pomodoro-timer/

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My pomodoro timer


would be great to hear a feedback. TIA.

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Compare, contrast, criticize. All is welcome :slight_smile: https://codepen.io/galexynye/full/PQaQYv/

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These are subjective and by no means wrong but I think session would be better worded as work, because technically the break is also a session. It’s not very important, but strikes me as inconsistent that you describe what I should be doing in the break part, but not the work part. Others may not agree though.

Also, I know it is implicit that we are working in minutes, but some people could maybe interpret the session as being hours (or even seconds somehow). Maybe labelling it with minutes or adding a :00 may imply that. Once again, not important.

The red at the bottom when you start reminds me of getting shot in a FPS game. This is neither positive or negative, I just found it funny :smiley:.

Lastly and I think most importantly, it took me a second to see that you had to click the big box to get it started. While that isn’t a problem for me, maybe my mum may get confused for 30 secs or whatever. What is obvious to me or you may not be obvious to everyone, so my suggestion would be initially have the button have a big go! or something then switch to the countdown once pressed.

This sounds quite negative, but these are very small subjective things that occur to me and you’ve done a great job overall!

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Thanks for the feedback!

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Please Your feedback is highly appreciated,

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Looks great! Only thing you might want to change is the word “Reset” is overflowing outside the button.

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Here’s my tomato clock. I want to do a version with animation in the near future.
Feedback much appreciated!

Thanks

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https://codepen.io/dodo14/pen/yvrxoe what do you think about my JS code? Its all working and i know its ugly as hell but i just want to focus on javascript now and want to know if my code is bad and ugly

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Not sure if it’s bad or not but formatting could use a small makeover!

This is just one standard from among many but it might help.
https://standardjs.com/rules.html

function breakTime(){
    if(breakBool === true){
        minSpan.textContent = breakLength.textContent;
        width=0;

vs

function breakTime () {
    if (breakBool === true) {
        minSpan.textContent = breakLength.textContent;
        width = 0;
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Hi, here is my pomodoro project. I found this very difficult! I’d love to get some tips on how to better write my code, if anyone has any thoughts, particularly with css grids and a responsive layout, this was my first crack at those. Thanks!

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At a glance it looks like it functions really well, nice job! It might benefit from some design tweaks like increased margins around your main elements, it feels a little tight. Also some more colors could make things pop, the red/white/blue is a little hard on the eyes.

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Looks great! Love the design and the chimes, everything goes together really well. The only thing I saw you might want to look into is the title is really close to the top of the window, the ‘d’ goes over when you shrink the window. Overall, awesome!

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Thanks for your detailed feedback, i will consider your notes and yeah you’r righy

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Yeah , you’re right , i will fix it , many Thanx pro.

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Project Link - http://codepen.io/ivanlim/full/BYgKWa