Looking for feedback for my Portfolio page

Looking for feedback for my Portfolio page
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#1

Hello guys!
Well, after a large break I came back to FCC and completed a portfolio page. Please look at it maybe you’ll find a mistake or bug. Or you will have something to advise. Any feedback will be helpful.


#2

It looks good, and you got that scrollspy thing to work!


#3

Shutsumon, thank you for your feedback. Yes, first time it didn’t work as I didn’t set links for bootstrap properly.
But there is still a horizontal scrolling in mobile devices. I don’t know how to fix it for now.


#4

I used data-* attributes for scrollspy plugin. Also you can use JS.


#5

I like the clean and simple design. I suggest adding some top padding to your section headings so when the page jumps from the navigation it doesn’t stop directly on top of the heading.


#7

Burak, thank you for the note! I have fixed it and now it should look better )


#8

Good simple design. I like the minimalist color scheme you used. I am not sure if you are looking to work on other projects right now, but I might encourage you to remove the line, “And I currently look forward to beginning work in real projects.” In the context of a portfolio, it could be viewed is a bit redundant and might not come across in the best way. Also, it has a couple language issues. Starting a sentence with “and” is generally frowned upon as improper English, and it should be beginning work “on”, not “in”, real projects.

keep up the good work!


#9

Aaron, oh, thanks a lot! It’s so helpful. I fixed these mistakes. It is so important to get this notice about grammar.
I plan to make one-page application on Angular from this page, not serious, just for fun, to strength my knowledge. So I need more text and other stuff to work to it and portfolio page will include only my works. :slight_smile: