My new portfolio site - feedback please

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Hi All,

I’m looking for some feedback or constructive criticism on my new portfolio site. I tried to do something different en go with a kind of comic book look. The titles in the portfolio section are actual links, I want to make that a bit clearer but for now I just wanted to put the site live.

If anybody is interested in the code, you can check it at Github.

Thanks in advance,

Steven

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I like the comic style a lot and it’s also really unique! I just got a little bit confused about where to look when some images didn’t scroll while the text was scrolling.

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Yeah, the comic effect confused me for a minute – had to scroll back and forth within the projects to track what was happening.

I also like that each section’s title is “sticky” to a point. Small detail, but very very clever.

I like the look, i like the innovative ideas going on. Very well done.

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I have to say, this is a very original portfolio, great job. Now, things to consider:

  1. I noticed the contact section is breaking on mobile device, you probably want to check your responsive code and make sure the page is fully responsive.

  2. I would probably use a friendlier font to describe a project (in the orange square) in your portfolio section.

  3. Stories and contact heading scrolls down, not sure if this is intended. If it is, I probably wouldn’t do it myself, it looks a bit out of place, like a bug.

Other than that, it’s great, I really like the idea.

edit: The portfolio section might be a bit confusing at first glance, especially for non tech people, maybe you want to take a look at that, although I understand that’s probably like the core section of your design.

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I like the look, nice design.

  1. I have done all the tutorials you have on the page. Showing them isn’t a problem but having them as the main source of your portfolio might be. I would definitely say you need to have something that is your work and your work alone, not just tutorial projects.

  2. This might just be me, but I would say the tone of some of the text is almost too personal.

  3. You have some spelling mistakes and the grammar might need a little love. My advice, as a non-native English speaker myself, use a grammar checker with spell checking capabilities. There are online tools and browser extensions like Grammarly that can help.

webdeveloper > web developer

webdevelopment > web development

pasionate > passionate

enthousiastic > enthusiastic

proces > process

there is anyway I can help you > there is any way I can help you

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Thanks everybody for the feedback! I’m going to incorporate them when I’m going to update the site later this week.

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Design is good,but lets be practical some elements are so distracting and better use opacity for some colors ,some elements are eye catching due to color while some are not.