I just finished my first project, Please check it and give your feedback?
Nice colors, good picture, but I’m not a fan of the main content being a single paragraph with centered text. IMO should be multiple paragraphs with default left aligned text or justified text. Lot’s of dates used, lends itself towards a timeline list or summary box for easy scanning.
BTW you link to Krona One but apply Poppins.
Your Tribute Page looks interesting.
If I can add something: there is not much contrast between font and background so it is a bit hard to read ( maybe font in bold or different font type?)
I really like main photo.