Please comment on my Tribute Page

Please comment on my Tribute Page
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#1

Please review my tribute Page, Click here to view my Project This is my first HTML project. Feel free comment and point out at my mistakes. Suggestions are welcome.


#2

It looks really good, I really like the side by side layout. The only thing I would recommend is changing your column breakpoints to col-sm-xx rather than col-xs-xx so that it looks a little better on mobile screens. Great first project, keep it up!


#3

Pretty good! Fixing up the mobile response will help. Also, the large block of text could use some visual interest to break it up a little. Some suggestions:

  • I really like the typeface you use for the h1 at the top, but pairing it with Roboto for the main body text doesn’t provide much contrast. Maybe try a nice serif or slab-serif?
  • You have a couple of quotes in there. Those could stunning if they were pulled out as blockquotes and given some attractive styling to make them stand out.
  • Perhaps move the images from the side bar and scatter them throughout the paragraphs of the main text to break up the text a little.
  • You have a big Introduction heading, but no other headings. Two or three more headings would help break up the text.

The sidebar looks very nice on a desktop, but it doesn’t look good if the browser window is shrunk thinner—the text gets too squished up. I would remove the bullets and indents, and maybe even consider setting a min-width on the sidebar container.