# Portfolio Challenge Review. Tare it a part with honest feed back

**URL:** <https://forum.freecodecamp.org/t/portfolio-challenge-review-tare-it-a-part-with-honest-feed-back/190397>\
**Category:** I Built This\
**Created:** [May 10, 2018, 4:27pm UTC](https://forum.freecodecamp.org/t/portfolio-challenge-review-tare-it-a-part-with-honest-feed-back/190397 "2018-05-10T16:27:14Z")\
**Posts on this page:** 5\
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**Author:** ![TheCodeMan99](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/freecodecamp/user_avatar/forum.freecodecamp.org/thecodeman99/32/86338_2.png) [@TheCodeMan99](https://forum.freecodecamp.org/u/TheCodeMan99)\
**Post date:** [May 10, 2018, 4:27pm UTC](https://forum.freecodecamp.org/t/portfolio-challenge-review-tare-it-a-part-with-honest-feed-back/190397/1 "2018-05-10T16:27:15Z")

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Let me know what you think. I had no understanding of front end development before starting

[Portfolio Challenge](https://codepen.io/CodeMonsta/full/wjyYpW/) free code camp

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**Author:** ![L0TU5](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/freecodecamp/user_avatar/forum.freecodecamp.org/l0tu5/32/160313_2.png) [@L0TU5](https://forum.freecodecamp.org/u/L0TU5)\
**Post date:** [May 10, 2018, 6:16pm UTC](https://forum.freecodecamp.org/t/portfolio-challenge-review-tare-it-a-part-with-honest-feed-back/190397/2 "2018-05-10T18:16:04Z")

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Nice use of parallax! Very smooth. Consider not having a big text-wall right at the first view though. A title and maybe an snippet that gives the user a solid initial impression would be a lot more effective to draw them into the content of the rest of your page.

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**Author:** ![TheCodeMan99](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/freecodecamp/user_avatar/forum.freecodecamp.org/thecodeman99/32/86338_2.png) [@TheCodeMan99](https://forum.freecodecamp.org/u/TheCodeMan99)\
**Post date:** [May 10, 2018, 6:50pm UTC](https://forum.freecodecamp.org/t/portfolio-challenge-review-tare-it-a-part-with-honest-feed-back/190397/3 "2018-05-10T18:50:20Z")

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@L0TU5 Thanks for the feedback!

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**Author:** ![TheCodeMan99](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/freecodecamp/user_avatar/forum.freecodecamp.org/thecodeman99/32/86338_2.png) [@TheCodeMan99](https://forum.freecodecamp.org/u/TheCodeMan99)\
**Post date:** [May 10, 2018, 7:35pm UTC](https://forum.freecodecamp.org/t/portfolio-challenge-review-tare-it-a-part-with-honest-feed-back/190397/4 "2018-05-10T19:35:29Z")

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your advice took it to the next level.

> **[Portfolio 3.0](https://codepen.io/CodeMonsta/full/wjyYpW/)**
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Thanks.

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**Author:** ![ILM](https://sea3.discourse-cdn.com/freecodecamp/user_avatar/forum.freecodecamp.org/ilm/32/363239_2.png) [@ILM](https://forum.freecodecamp.org/u/ILM)\
**Post date:** [June 1, 2021, 1:51pm UTC](https://forum.freecodecamp.org/t/portfolio-challenge-review-tare-it-a-part-with-honest-feed-back/190397/5 "2021-06-01T13:51:23Z")

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Closed on June 1, 2021, 1:51pm UTC