Preview would be highly appreciated on my tribute page

preview would be highly appreciated on my tribute page, tips on how to improve it and what you think i did wrong

Design part:

  • Your image needs to be centered.
  • consider more padding right-left of paragraphs… Studies show the eye cannot maintain when the next line begins when the text on a line is so long. Or break in two columns like a magazine does.

Coding part:

  • you gotta remove all styling from your html and put it in your CSS.
  • consider replacing the bold tags too, into CSS. What a hassle it would be if you decided, they should not be bold anymore. With CSS, you only have to remove few lines of code.
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thank you very much,would do that