Project Criticism

I felt like sharing online to really boost my learning skills. I want to improve for the upcoming project challenges I will face. These are two projects I came up for my first two challenges and I want some good feedback and

intelligent criticisms.

Here are my two projects:

Project 1: (satirical foresight in a survey form)

Project 2: (Normal Tribute Page)

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I like the Knights of the Old Republic tribute, I remember the first one was a really good game as well. Anyway maybe add some hyper links to navigate a little more instead of scrolling and then make the images open up in a larger size when clicked. Good luck

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beautiful, i am almost ashamed at what i did for this project.
well the most obvious(only thing i found) is the radio buttons not aligning,

It will look better in smaller devices haha

Really nice work, @sbig8643 ! Really enjoyed scrolling through them, and that’s coming from someone who doesn’t really follow Star Wars. The only thing I can think of is adding some cool font to the Disney Star Wars Feedback Form. Something that goes well with the Star Wars theme. Here are my ideas:

Make sure the small text is clear and easy to read. Using Orbitron, for example, on the question text could be a little hard to read and over-the-top. So, if the font is very geometric and different from the traditional classic web font design (sans-serif and other very readable fonts), just use it for the titles and headings, where the text is large and the number of words are few. For small, fine text with more words, be sure to err on the side of readability.

Once again, great work! Keep it up — you have a good eye for design.

Nicolas

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Your projects would benefit from an HTML validator like Ready to check - Nu Html Checker and fix the errors that come out.

You have a couple of things that need to be fixed, for example you have a duplicated id in the Survey Form (but it’s not the only thing that needs to be fixed)

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