Projet-Feedback for my Landing Page (Softux)

Project Feedback
#1

Hello there!!
Here’s my landing page for a fitness product (that I found on youtube :shushing_face:)

https://codepen.io/Delatux/pen/QWjraje?editors=1100

Feel free to give me some advices!!

Bye!
Softux!

#2

Hello

In my opinion, your h1 is not so easy to read :slight_smile:

Maybe you could try to explore media query for mobile device
Your h1 goes under navbar when reducing size screen <700px

#3

There are some things you need to revisit for your page @ghedjati.sofyane.

  • We don’t have access to your google account so your background image isn’t loading for me. That being the case, it’s white text on a white background. You need to think about a fallback in case your background image does not load.
  • Do not use <br> for force line breaks. If you want four paragraphs then use four paragraph elements.
    • Don’t use it in your cards either.
  • Run your HTML code through the W3C validator.
    • Since copy/paste from codepen you can ignore the first warning and first two errors.
    • There are coding errors you need to address.
  • All of your styling should be external. Don’t use in-line styling.
  • Check to see if the email field is populated correctly when hitting the submit button. Throw an error if it is not.
    • You learned how to do this when you created the survey form.
  • Change the cursor to a pointer when hovering over the submit button
  • On your cards, only the shopping cart and text is clickable. The whole button should be.
#4