Simple tribute page - feedback request!

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Hi,

I just did a very simple tribute page, and would love any feedback and/or suggestions! Thank you!

Tribute page link

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Hi @terri-pie, great page! I really like that header font and page design. However, there are a few corrections you should address:

  • Your head element is not required by Codepen. Instead, you should paste everything in your head in the ‘Stuff for head’ part of the pen settings.

  • You misspelled ‘respected’ and ‘neurologist’ as ‘repected’ and ‘nuerologist’ in your subheading.

Overall, a very nice page. Keep up the good work! :+1:

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Meni je ovo lijepo.Hvala što ste ovu stanicu podijelili sa nama.Nova sam u ovome pa ne mogu dati stručno mišljenje.Sretno u daljem radu.

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Impressive! you did really well.
however, don’t you think isolating the main biography in a separate container and changing the text alignment to “JUSTIFY” would make the page look better?

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Thank you @Code_Camper! I’m new to using CodePen, so I didn’t know about the ‘Stuff for head’ section. I will definitely make use of it from now on! :slight_smile: Also, thanks for catching my spelling errors! (Already corrected!)

I appreciate the feedback!

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Thank you @tonymandated, that is an interesting suggestion. I will make a copy of my pen and try that out to see the effect. Thank you for the idea!

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English version

This is nice to me. Thank you for sharing this station with us. I’m new to this so I can’t give an expert opinion. Good luck in your future work.

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Hey @terri-pie!

Your page looks good!
I like the Font and the Color scheme.

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Thank you for your feedback! @f.sakiba55 :heart: I’m new as well and all opinions are valued!!

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I appreciate that @codely! :smiley: I love all of the great fonts available at Google Fonts!

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That’s a great start! Congrats.
I would recommend you leaving some margins left and right in the whole page, now the paragraphs are really long and a bit hard to read.

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Your page looks good @terri-pie. Some things to revisit;

  • Your HTML entity should end with a semi-colon
  • Codepen provides validators for HTML, CSS and JS. Click on the down arrow in the upper right of each section and then click on the respective ‘Analyze’ link.
    • The one for CSS is good. There’s a duplicate declaration you may want to correct.
  • Do not use the <br> element to force line breaks or spacing. That’s what CSS is for.