Tribute Page - Constructive Criticism please

Tribute Page - Constructive Criticism please
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#1

I have just gotten to a stopping point for my tribute page. I am not 100% sure if I am done or not. But i do like where it is it. I would love some feedback.

Thanks!

Tribute page - https://codepen.io/Ngoldberg/full/ejZWNy/


#2

Passed all tests, which is good. You could make the page a little brighter though.


#3

NaoG, I absolutely love that the layout is clean and clear.
I also LOVE that the information is short and to the point as opposed to paragraphs,

I have only 2 suggestions:

  1. Lighten the text bubbles a bit to help them pop.
  2. Remove his name from each sentence, since it is a tribute to him and a timeline of his life.

I hope that you find my suggestions constructive and not insulting. I truly Love the page!

I also had no idea that he died! That made me sad; he was one of my favorite actors.


#4

Thanks @mrsmmadams, I will look into lightening the text bubbles and see about reworking the verbiage on the timeline.

Thanks so much for your input.

AND I KNOW I WAS COMPLETELY HEARTBROKEN WHEN HE PASSED!!!