Tribute Page Feedback QuintenJ

So I am a System/Network Administrator for my career. Trying to possibly make a change to development. More than likely backend because I cannot design good looking websites or UX. Anyways

Let me know what you think.

@QuintenJ, nice use of Miami’s colors. Overall, good job but;

  • consider dialing your font down a little. It’s huge!
  • in each of your main sections (synopsis, early years, pro career) you’ve separated your text to be like paragraphs but yet they’re all one big paragraph. Consider wrapping each paragraph in <p> </p> elements and it’ll read more like what you want.
  • looks as though you’ve covered the last part of ‘pro career’
  • codepen provides you with validators for HTML, CSS, and JS. Click on the arrow in the upper right and then the respective ‘Analyze’ link. You’ve duplicated one of your selectors in CSS.

Great advice I appreciate it. The text was a bit large. On mobile but I’ll make the paragraph changes tomorrow. It makes perfect sense.