Tribute to the one that stopped the killing of twins- Mary Slessor

I have just completed my tribute page project for Mary Slessor-who stopped the killing of twins. Will appreciate your feedbacks:

The layout is quite nice. I would remove that little floating moon; it’s distracting to the reader and it makes the grid look off.

I would also offer that, after reading your page, I still have no idea what she actually did…something about saving twins but how? And why did the twins need to be saved in the first place?

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Thank you for your feedback, I had thought about both. I initially explicitly stated that she stopped the killing of twins but changed that because I had reservations about it. Will make the amendment. Many thanks