Hello everyone! I’m so glad to be apart of this movement!
This is my first project. Please let me know how i can improve! Dont be shy
https://codepen.io/lou1130/full/egZMGy/
Hi! We’re glad to have you among us!
Overall, the page looks decent, and I mean good decent.
The first thing that catches my eye is little bit of inconsistency:
- your first header is center. Why you don’t center the second one? If every section starts with centered header, it looks clean.
- timeline: this is important to emphasise which part of the life you are talking about, don’t be scared to bold those sections (childhood, the grind … )
- the list, why is it smaller than the rest of the article?
For the first project, you did great, but you can polish it a little more
You can read a bit about design principles, but not to much! It’ll scare you, like it scared me once. The nice and easy topic for the first projects is “negative space”.
BTW, I am no specialist, for now, web developement is just a hobby for me, and all I wrote is just my subjective opinion
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Thank You so much for the feedback! I’m going to definitely check out those design principles.