Hey Pvanloon1983 it looks really great!
I am really inspired by your landing page. I just think it has really cool design and execution.
I did realize that I kind of caused a little issue with my suggestion because the monitor tower in the image is silver and your text is white. Now the monitor in the background makes it hard to read the text over the image!
Before, you had the page spaced out so that the text from #innertext-first-section p wasn’t over the background image.
I had thought about this before when I was playing around with your pen and I forgot about it because I wasn’t sure what to suggest as a fix. In my screenshot, I tried giving the paragraph a black mostly opaque background so there is more contrast between the picture and the text. I also made the white text a little opaque which makes it look grey instead of white. This is an effect I am really into right now but if you wanted a brighter white from the text you don’t have to do this.
You could probably experiment with making the background-image more opaque so the base background color bleeds through a little.
Whatever you want works here.
I seriously love your pen. Thanks for sharing it!