This is my tribute page . I built it using bootstrap ! Feel free to criticize!
Hi Gow,
Nice work on your Tribute project.
The code looks clean and the page is responsive .
I do have a few recommendations (purely subjective)
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The expanding quote section was a nice touch, it could be improved by adding a button to collapse it again.
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I think it would look better if there was a bit of consistency throughout the sections, as opposed to changing colors. Black text on grey is a bit hard to read (my eyesight is terrible).
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I liked the fixed navigation bar, but I noticed that the grey part (the active highlight) connects to the top of the nav div. Maybe add some padding?
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I think that adding some microinteractions like smooth scrolling would enhance your tribute page.
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Look into modifying the number of characters per line (45-75, 66 being ideal) and adding paragraphs, so that it doesn’t look like a wall of text.
I hope this helped!
Thank you so much. Your feedback means a lot to me.These suggestions are really helping me understand things better.I would try to improve all that you have stated ! Thank you again !
You’re welcome gowisgreat, good luck on your future projects!