Looking for Feedback on Portfolio

Looking for Feedback on Portfolio
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#1

Just finished building my portfolio page. I am looking fro feedback on what I could improve on. Any input is appreciated.
Thank you in advance


#2

Lovely yellow train, man!

But you should make the entire page look like the same story.
Blue text at the bottom seems like it’s from another story, another site.
Adjust the style a bit, so that it will be a solid story.
And there is also high-contrast background for the first header.
Make header more shy (slide it to the left side, above the dark part, with a bit smaller font-size), because this background really rocks.
This is just my opinion, u know… But it is reasonable.

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