Can you guys review my resume

I have a couple ideas that were given to me about my own resume by some more talented resume writers than myself…

  1. Give a small intro about yourself at the top . Summarize what you’ve done and what you’re all about.
  2. Don’t put volunteer job or intern job. That doesn’t tell them anything about the job title you had. It also is not lying to omit that information. Instead, give yourself a fitting title for your role.

Make sure that anything you write down here you’re able to talk about. One idea someone gave me was to have a second personal version of the resume that has talking points about everything there, so you don’t get caught off guard when asked for details.

Also, for the sake of applying, use a service like Jobscan to see if your resume will handle the ATS checkers. ( it’s like SSO for resumes as I understand it)

You have bullets that say what you did, but they don’t really describe why that is important. I would use the action-impact format to make sure you highlight why readers should care about the bullet.

Also, generally bullets are not sentences and you don’t need the .

Also, I would take your list of skills out and put them in your bullets instead so you have some justification and context instead of a soup of skills.

Also, instead of ‘fluent’ I would use whatever measured language level you achieved, such as from TOFL or similar.

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thank you so much. How about web developer instead of volunteer

Yes, I also feel that part is kind of off for me. I would try to change it

Yeah, that sounds good!

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