Feedback for a few simple websites

Feedback for a few simple websites
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#1

I have made a few simple websites, I would love to hear all kinds of feedback for the same. :slight_smile:

I know these are too much links for now, but I am working on creating a single site, from where all of these can be accessed :sweat_smile::sweat_smile::sweat_smile::sweat_smile::sweat_smile:

A basic portfolio template.
Link : https://pedantic-jackson-1a9486.netlify.com/

An Event Invite.
Link : https://awesome-bassi-1a7da1.netlify.com/

A tourist attraction site of Green Forest Tours.
Link : https://tender-newton-e8b5ab.netlify.com/

A product page of Fitbit ‘charge’.
Link : https://fervent-mirzakhani-cffa72.netlify.com/

A simple Green Rebel menu.
Link : https://blissful-jones-af43a3.netlify.com/

Simple Roxane Gay’s website
Link : https://hopeful-snyder-0a3cb0.netlify.com/

Batman vs Superman website
Link : https://happy-goldwasser-41c8b1.netlify.com/

Rihanna fan site
Link : https://stoic-mclean-4d41d6.netlify.com/

Toy store site (Needs rework)
Link : https://silly-nobel-f706f7.netlify.com/

Photographer site
Link : https://blissful-hypatia-83d84f.netlify.com/


#2

You’ve been busy!

I decided to review the Batman vs. Superman one (maybe other campers can do others)

I liked that you provided a link to the inspiration for the page, that was very decent of you.
I am not sure why though, I wasn’t able to use the menu at all (nothing worked for me, and I’m on a windows laptop with chrome).
Nothing else on the page was responsive (eg. nothing happened when I hovered on anything)

On mobile, the background picture shows poorly because I can only see the very edge of Batman’s nose in the view. I think you may have to edit that picture so bring the two hero’s noses closer together for mobile!

Just some quick thoughts, and I wish you the best as you continue on with your efforts.


#3

All 3 of the above link to the same url. Just edit your original post to reflect the correct urls.


#4

Thank you…totally missed that…
Corrected… :slight_smile:


#5

Thanks for all the feedback, the menu is non functional (removed it now), It was just for testing purpose.
I think I do need to reconsider the Background image now.

Also, most of these sites are static, and the content that is visible is everything…
It won’t be wrong if these are called landing pages more than they are called sites :stuck_out_tongue: