I mostly like it.
I would say that on your projects, the text “I MADE THIS SITE TO CONVICE A PHOTOGRAPHER TO LET ME MAKE HIS WEBSITE FOR HIM. IT WORKED, HE’S MY FIRST PAYING CLIENT.” is almost unreadable because to the color choice. In fact, now that I can read it clearly, I notice the spelling mistake.
You definitely want to go through with a fine tooth comb and weed out any spelling/grammar mistakes. It’s very easy to miss those things (I certainly do.) Cut and paste the text into a good word processor or a grammar web site. And also read aloud, line by line, slowly. (I’m also not a big fan off all caps in anything but titles - it’s harder to read.)
And more spelling mistakes here: “wasen’t” and “clients” should be “client’s”.
Seriously, that will be a big turn off for many hiring managers.